The
statement of purpose:
In “Back to
the land”, Kalman encourages city residence to change the way of growing food
and eating habits which will help to improve health and develop a better family
relationships, which could be achieved by finding the missing part of democracy
that has been lost long time ago, the democracy of healthy eating. Kalman uses her
experience in visiting organic farms in California and showing how healthy,
naturally and tasty the food is from these farms. Also, the placement of the edible
schoolyard program in a middle school in Berkeley help Kalman’s readers
understand that introducing old habits to kids make them understand the concept of healthy food
,encourage them to work with each other, and be with their family , which will eventually lead to a better social environment.
It is great how you compact the entire piece into one paragraph. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI also agree that Kalman's purpose in Back to the Land, is to encourage people who live in cities to have better eating habits. I also like the examples you chose to show this, especially the topic of the edible schoolyards.
ReplyDeleteI like how you picked children as your target market. In addition, you backed up your ideas with children learning from adults, and the best idea of all children learning in a school setting healthy eating habits. Great ideas!
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