1. reflect on how you wrote your essay
and made composition choices
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How
did you decide on the order of paragraphs, your introduction, the evidence you
used, the questions you asked, the distinctions you made… or other choices?
My interpretive
attempt in writing about Josh
Neufeld’s “A.D. New Orleans after the Deluge,” focused on the natural disaster
of Hurricane Katrina and the magnitude of shock and unbelievably horrible
events that took place afterwards with the victims of this deadly storm.
2. discuss the feedback you’ve received
(mentioning specific things)
My feedback
was surprisingly good in being well received.
Ms. Sullivan especially seemed to like the conciseness of my sentence, “In
A.D: New Orleans After the Deluge, Neufeld uses astounding shock of the
unbelievable events to show the magnitude that Katrina had on New Orleans
people." Ms. Sullivan also felt
that I should provide more supportive sentences for greater development on
factors such as the color schemes that Neufeld used.
3. list some directions you want to take
in a revision
I would
like to take my writing further in development of focusing on the moving visual
aesthetic qualities that Neufeld innovatively utilized.
4. ask questions or state concerns you
still have about your essay
My concern
is to provide in my next essay adequate information that will be in balance
with my personal interpretations and focuses of attention.
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